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So help me ( WhtDove challenge )

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 10-14-1999 11:00 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

So help me

I savor every word with fits of aim.
Each charming phrase so neither be to blame.
For since I've learned her peripatetic space
I smile and try to keep myself in her grace.
Amphetamine desires blood, comb each classic tome.
Analyze each move and look to see which way she roam.
With rapt regard and steely look without a show of fear
My answer is a simple and a pleasant, yes my dear.

Now she comes from a different zone and a different tone
Her kettle boils with olive oil and often sounds a crone.
She is of positive drown and whatever her lot
She hammers it down whether it be true or not.
A force much equal to a hurricane.
And to a hurricane there's little refrain.
I've come to withstand the force with little or no fear
And anchor my answers with a simple yes my dear.

Of fears and tears there has been enough.
We have learned to fly above that stuff.
And tenderness is but a plus,
For very simple folks like us.
Our love is as strong as the gordian knot
And for a common couple that is allot.
Our roots are deep in the common sod.
Two common peas in a common pod.

And though we are of different ilk
Our marriage is as strong as silk.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-14-1999 11:14 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done! Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
WhtDove
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2 posted 10-14-1999 11:23 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I have to say this was heartfelt. Not like the rest. Very well done! Thank you for the sincerety! I appreciate it!
Pepper
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3 posted 10-14-1999 12:06 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

enjoyed this much Sy

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-14-1999 01:03 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Smiling...that's what a marraige should be Seymore, thanks for the read
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 10-14-1999 01:43 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Watch,
Thank you for the like.
WhtDove,
I tried to write a so help me. I think I came close.
Pepper,
I'm glad you enjoyed.
Hoot,
Thank you for the smile, it will last a while.
suthern
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6 posted 10-14-1999 01:51 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Well done, Seymour!!
Seymour Tabin
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Suthern,
Thank you for the well done.
Denise
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8 posted 10-14-1999 06:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Honest, tender and sweet!

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Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-14-1999).]
 
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