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Our Life Together Denied

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 10-14-1999 10:45 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Tears roll down my face
For I feel alone in this place
Missing you Sis
I need your warm embrace

I have you here in my heart
But need you here in my life
Why is it we had to part?
It cuts like a knife

I try to hide the anger within
Try to control the pain inside
My head in a total spin
Our life together denied

I'll reach out for you
Til the day I die
And willingly go with you
To that special place in the sky.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 1999 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-14-1999 10:51 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Fabulous poem.Lovely tribute to one lost!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
WhtDove
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2 posted 10-14-1999 11:27 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Aww D.A. I'm sorry you're feeling so down! There will come a time when you two will be together again. I'm sorry friend you're hurting right now. You know I'm there for you!!!!!!!!!!! HUGS
Dark Angel
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3 posted 10-14-1999 11:34 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Watcher666, thank you
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WhtDove,Angel, thanks hon, yes I know you are here for me. I thank you

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-14-1999 01:00 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Dark Angel, my heart goes out to you. How sad this is, but what a wonderful tribute
Moonshine
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5 posted 10-15-1999 05:31 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

DarkAngel - That was a beautiful piece. I care about you sweety and I will always be here.......
Pepper
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6 posted 10-15-1999 06:55 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Hugs D A....very lovely tribute....I am so sorry for your loss.

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
JennyLee
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7 posted 10-15-1999 11:04 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

This made my soul weep...what a heartfelt
tribute...lovely.

Jenny
Marilyn
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8 posted 10-15-1999 11:37 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I am sorry for your loss DA. I wish I had the words that could comfort.
Dark Angel
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9 posted 10-15-1999 07:01 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hoot, thanks honey, you're very kind

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Moonshine, yes Hon, I know you care about me I care about you too, Thanks so much.
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Pepper,JennyLee and Marilyn, thanks for your lovely comments and kindness


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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Balladeer
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10 posted 10-15-1999 07:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Your writing is very emotion-filled and heart-felt. I wish you well.
Dark Angel
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11 posted 10-15-1999 07:56 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Balladeer, thanks for your lovley comment and well wishes

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


wannabe_poet
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since 10-15-1999
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12 posted 10-16-1999 02:06 AM       View Profile for wannabe_poet   Email wannabe_poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wannabe_poet

First I would like to say that I am sorry for your loss and one day I believe you two will be reunited. This was a touching piece.
I know where you are coming from!
Isis
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13 posted 10-16-1999 02:25 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Dark Angel, so sad to read this poem. The lonliness is overwhelming at times, I know.
You have many years of wonderful memories to remember and embrace, and you will see her again one day...

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Denise
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14 posted 10-16-1999 07:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So touching. I wish you only the best.

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Denise
Dark Angel
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15 posted 10-16-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Wanna-be, thanks so much for kind words
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Isis, thank you for your lovely comment, unfortunatley I don't have any memories, we did not live together for a minute. Thanks you
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Denise, thank you for your well wishes appreciate it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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