Our Life Together Denied - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 1999-10-14 10:45 AM

Tears roll down my face
For I feel alone in this place
Missing you Sis
I need your warm embrace

I have you here in my heart
But need you here in my life
Why is it we had to part?
It cuts like a knife

I try to hide the anger within
Try to control the pain inside
My head in a total spin
Our life together denied

I'll reach out for you
Til the day I die
And willingly go with you
To that special place in the sky.

------------------
What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-14 10:51 AM

Fabulous poem.Lovely tribute to one lost!

------------------
Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-10-14 11:27 AM

Aww D.A. I'm sorry you're feeling so down! There will come a time when you two will be together again. I'm sorry friend you're hurting right now. You know I'm there for you!!!!!!!!!!! HUGS

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-10-14 11:34 AM

Watcher666, thank you

-------------

WhtDove,Angel, thanks hon, yes I know you are here for me. I thank you

------------------
What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-10-14 01:00 PM

Dark Angel, my heart goes out to you. How sad this is, but what a wonderful tribute

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

5 posted 1999-10-15 05:31 AM

DarkAngel - That was a beautiful piece. I care about you sweety and I will always be here.......

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

6 posted 1999-10-15 06:55 AM

Hugs D A....very lovely tribute....I am so sorry for your loss.

------------------

May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

7 posted 1999-10-15 11:04 AM

This made my soul weep...what a heartfelt
tribute...lovely.

Jenny

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 1999-10-15 11:37 AM

I am sorry for your loss DA. I wish I had the words that could comfort.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 1999-10-15 07:01 PM

Hoot, thanks honey, you're very kind

-----------------
Moonshine, yes Hon, I know you care about me

I care about you too, Thanks so much.
-----------------
Pepper,JennyLee and Marilyn, thanks for your lovely comments and kindness

------------------
What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 1999-10-15 07:36 PM

Your writing is very emotion-filled and heart-felt. I wish you well.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 1999-10-15 07:56 PM

Balladeer, thanks for your lovley comment and well wishes

------------------
What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

wannabe_poet
Junior Member

since 1999-10-15

Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada

12 posted 1999-10-16 02:06 AM

First I would like to say that I am sorry for your loss and one day I believe you two will be reunited. This was a touching piece.
I know where you are coming from!

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

13 posted 1999-10-16 02:25 AM

Dark Angel, so sad to read this poem. The lonliness is overwhelming at times, I know.
You have many years of wonderful memories to remember and embrace, and you will see her again one day...

------------------
How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

14 posted 1999-10-16 07:11 PM

So touching. I wish you only the best.

------------------
Denise

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

15 posted 1999-10-16 08:47 PM

Wanna-be, thanks so much for kind words

-----------
Isis, thank you for your lovely comment, unfortunatley I don't have any memories, we did not live together for a minute. Thanks you

-----------
Denise, thank you for your well wishes appreciate it

------------------
What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.