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Windows Of The Soul (acrostic)

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A Romantic Heart
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WINDOWS OF THE SOUL

When looking into your eyes,
I see the bluest of skies.

Needing to go deeper,
Deeper than any ocean,
Open door to your soul I find,
With windows of love so kind.
Seeing what is hidden or not exposed,
Opening the windows of your soul.

Finding there your deepest fears,
The deepest love and care,
Hearing it speak through the air,
Eternity dwells there,

Sweetness of despair,
Outwardly crying,
Unending loneliness of love dying,
Looking into the windows of your soul.
© Copyright 1999 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
John Yaws
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1 posted 10-14-1999 03:26 AM       View Profile for John Yaws   Email John Yaws   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit John Yaws's Home Page   View IP for John Yaws

Very clever use of the acrostic form. I liked it.

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A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 10-14-1999 03:39 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks Gun! Thanks for shareing YOUR poems!
hoot_owl_rn
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Good one
Pepper
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Well done R H .....

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A Romantic Heart
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Thanks Hoot and pepper!
Denise
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What a lovely poem and a great acrostic!
I simply love acrostics!

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Denise
 
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