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I share your cry! (challenge from Dreamevil re:to Whtdoves')

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A Romantic Heart
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0 posted 10-14-1999 01:57 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart


Oh, sweetie, I feel your heart is hurting,
Your eyes tell me of your pain,

Come let me hold you,
Let me kiss your worries away,

Let me cry with you,
let me make you laugh,

Honey, my dearest,
I am here for you,

I share your pain,
Your burden,
I am your shelter in the rain.

Let me be your shoulder to cry on,
Your friend to lean on,

I will wrap you in my arms of love,
I will comfort you,

I am beside you,
to guide you,

Let me take your mind,
a thousand miles away ,

I will laugh,
when you laugh,

Cry when you cry,

For I am you,
and you are I,

We are one,
I share every tear that falls from your eye.

Let me catch the tears
that you cry,

I will put them in a bottle,
to send miles away,

So my love,
You will never hurt again,
on a day like today!

Whatever your need,
I am here!

Relase all that pain,
in all your tears.

Don't be ashamed,
a man is more,

When he is real,
and tears fall to the floor.

I see a true heart,
one full of emotion,

A true man you are,
As your tears fall,
like waves of the ocean.


© Copyright 1999 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 10-14-1999 02:24 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Dreamevil asked us women to the same challenge whtdove asked the men..so this is my reply!hehe...
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 10-14-1999 02:53 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher


Sweet.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 10-14-1999 08:59 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely spoken
WhtDove
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4 posted 10-14-1999 10:48 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well done. I know how I feel inside about comfort it's just putting into words. Guess I will have to think on this one!
A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 10-14-1999 05:38 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Whtdove you have started something!hehe
thanks for the reply,you too hoot, and Chris
Pepper
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6 posted 10-14-1999 05:43 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Well done. I liked this much RH.

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 09-23-1999
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7 posted 10-14-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Challenge well met, my dear This is a beautiful piece indeed. Very well done.

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Denise
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8 posted 10-14-1999 07:14 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sweet and heartfelt!

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Denise
RainbowGirl
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9 posted 10-15-1999 03:30 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I like the idea of putting tears in a bottle..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

 
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