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I'm here, my love (Challenge from WhtDove)

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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0 posted 10-14-1999 12:35 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

When she cries I hold her tight
tell her it will be alright

Say "I love you" because I do
and say "I'm always here for you"

Ask "what is there I can do"
"it makes me sad, I feel it too"

"You're a part of me, I hold you dear"
"I want to take away your fear"

"Tell me please, where is this from?"
"If not, thats fine, I will not run"

"If you need me to hold you tight"
"I'll hold you long, with all my might"

"If you just need some time alone"
"say the words, it will be shown"

"I love you and I hold you dear"
"Remember love, Im always here"

Nothing else I need to say
for her I live, I love, I pray.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
© Copyright 1999 B.J.Howe - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 10-14-1999 12:40 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I liked this very much! I wonder if everyone will say something to this effect? No jest intended. I have one that does not do these things and was wondering how many of you do.
Thanks for meeting the challenge! Great job, and a wonderful person. Hope it stays like that always! Just what a women needs!
ThUnDeRkYsS
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2 posted 10-14-1999 12:48 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Well WhtDove, I speak from the heart. This is who I am, I will never change. Comforting is the best way to show your love and bring you closer together, through tears of joy and tears of sorrow. I want to be a part of each and every one.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
Michael
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3 posted 10-14-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wonderfully met, Thunder. Indeed, a true man's response.

WhtDove, I would be willing to bet the ones who "look the other way" when their lady cries are also the ones who wouldn't have the time to respond to your challenge 99% of the time.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.


Isis
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4 posted 10-14-1999 02:16 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

(SIGH) Like WhtDove mine doesn't do that for me either I should've married a poet!! Well Done

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Christopher
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5 posted 10-14-1999 02:48 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Another well met from me!
And timely as well!
A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 10-14-1999 02:52 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thunder, your words captivate me! careing and romantic,sensitive...but protective! Loved it! nicely done!
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 10-14-1999 08:58 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I really like this one Thunder....we need more men like you
ThUnDeRkYsS
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8 posted 10-14-1999 06:40 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Lots of thanks to each and every one of you. I appreciate your comments, and the kind words spoken to me are very heartfelt indeed Once again, Thank you.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
Watcher666
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9 posted 10-15-1999 03:54 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful verse.Liked this much.Your Lady is indeed lucky!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Denise
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10 posted 10-18-1999 09:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sweet! Challenge well met!

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Denise
 
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