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I'm here, my love (Challenge from WhtDove)
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I'm here, my love (Challenge from WhtDove) |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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When she cries I hold her tight tell her it will be alright Say "I love you" because I do and say "I'm always here for you" Ask "what is there I can do" "it makes me sad, I feel it too" "You're a part of me, I hold you dear" "I want to take away your fear" "Tell me please, where is this from?" "If not, thats fine, I will not run" "If you need me to hold you tight" "I'll hold you long, with all my might" "If you just need some time alone" "say the words, it will be shown" "I love you and I hold you dear" "Remember love, Im always here" Nothing else I need to say for her I live, I love, I pray. ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I liked this very much! I wonder if everyone will say something to this effect? No jest intended. I have one that does not do these things and was wondering how many of you do. Thanks for meeting the challenge! Great job, and a wonderful person. Hope it stays like that always! Just what a women needs! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Well WhtDove, I speak from the heart. This is who I am, I will never change. Comforting is the best way to show your love and bring you closer together, through tears of joy and tears of sorrow. I want to be a part of each and every one. ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wonderfully met, Thunder. Indeed, a true man's response. WhtDove, I would be willing to bet the ones who "look the other way" when their lady cries are also the ones who wouldn't have the time to respond to your challenge 99% of the time. ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
(SIGH) Like WhtDove mine doesn't do that for me either  I should've married a poet!!  Well Done ------------------ How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool? ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Another well met from me! And timely as well! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thunder, your words captivate me! careing and romantic,sensitive...but protective! Loved it! nicely done! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I really like this one Thunder....we need more men like you |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Lots of thanks to each and every one of you. I appreciate your comments, and the kind words spoken to me are very heartfelt indeed Once again, Thank you.------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful verse.Liked this much.Your Lady is indeed lucky! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sweet! Challenge well met!  ------------------ Denise |
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