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Nicole
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0 posted 1999-10-14 12:05 PM


The strengths I gain in life increase
A lesson learned at every turn
In such I find a sense of peace

Once married to a man caprice
Another’s kiss he soon did yearn
The strengths I gain in life increase

My children two are sweet surcease
Each day they chase away concern
In such I find a sense of peace

Disease might mark my life’s decease
The morrow is the day I learn
The strengths I gain in life increase

And when collectors’ calls decrease
My life will take an upward turn
In such I find a sense of peace

Though pain and strife will never cease
And often cause my heart to burn
The strengths I gain in life increase
In such I find a sense of peace



[This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 10-14-1999).]

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DreamEvil
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1 posted 1999-10-14 12:26 PM


Your villanelle likes me much my friend, 'tis a wondrous feat indeed, in form as well as content.

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Nothing is worse than sorrow,
except perhaps disdain.
I'll be myself tomorrow,
tonight I'll feel the pain.

DreamEvil©



Systematic Decay
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2 posted 1999-10-14 04:45 AM


I loved this poem. It is very elegantly stated

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Nan
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3 posted 1999-10-14 08:12 AM


You did take this in a direction that I hadn't anticipated - and brought your theme together nicely - A fine job, my friend...
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 1999-10-14 09:05 AM


Beautiful job on this one
Iloveit
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5 posted 1999-10-14 09:52 AM


really like this one too, you can feel the peace in your soul
Nicole
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6 posted 1999-10-14 03:15 PM


Thank you all

And especially to you Nan, thank you very much for taking the time and having the patience to teach the workshop!

Michael
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7 posted 1999-10-14 05:38 PM


Very wise words spoken here, Satiate. I myself was just glad we found strength to finish the villanelles. Your words are strong and your villanelle was completed nicely. Good job.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.




Denise
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8 posted 1999-10-14 08:31 PM


BRAVO! Perhaps someday I will find the patience and discipline to attempt one of these. My hats off to all of you who succeeded!

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Denise

Watcher666
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9 posted 1999-10-15 04:44 PM


Beautiful poem.I found much that I relate to here.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Alicat
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10 posted 1999-10-16 03:37 PM


Glad to see that Emily could escape John's lumberjack gruffness enough to put this one together.


Alicat the twitterpated satiated kilted kitty

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