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My Love is Forever

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Rose wings of fantasy beckon me,
Riding upon winds of creamy gold.
Isles of gleaming emerald I see,
Whispering ancient mysteries untold.

Beauty paints the twinkling sky,
And voices of the past quietly echo.
Upon a silver breath wishes fly,
Telling me to join the world below.

But beauty is but a pale visage,
An essence like a shallow sea.
I shall not visit such a mirage,
For love there shall never truly be.

I'd much rather wade through life,
Trudging through bitter tears and pain.
Knowing I'd forever share your strife,
Upon my shoulders, your tears would rain.

Living with you would be the greatest gift,
For you are all that truly matters to me.
Knowing you love me, that is my heart's lift,
And forever my love for you shall be.



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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Ohme
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1 posted 10-13-1999 11:05 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


Sounds like love to me and I like the way it sounds.
Very nice.

Ohme
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Nicely done.....the flow and the rhyme are good, the message wonderful
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3 posted 10-14-1999 08:55 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

Very very nice! I loved the imagery!
Encore, Encore!
I.Skye

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Alwye
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4 posted 10-14-1999 08:59 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

*sighs*..yup, sounds like love to me too..thank you all.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


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5 posted 10-18-1999 09:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Soooooooooo beautiful, Krista! I loved it!

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Denise
 
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