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Dark Hours

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Moonlight
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0 posted 10-13-1999 09:24 PM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

Glassy eyes stare back at me
From the bathroom mirror
It's 8am and the night was restless.
My body is still exhausted
From the night my mind did not rest.
Glassy eyes stare back at me
The warmth still trapped
Behind the heart and mind
Of an unnoticed soul.
So I close my eyes to the day
To walk through the dark hours
In the light of my mind.


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© Copyright 1999 Mary Ferguson - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 10-14-1999 08:35 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice finish to this one
Denise
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2 posted 10-18-1999 09:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Well done, Moonlight, I enjoyed this!

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3 posted 10-19-1999 01:30 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hey - like this! Excellent contrasting images in the last two lines.
Serraley
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4 posted 10-21-1999 05:56 AM       View Profile for Serraley   Email Serraley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Serraley

What a fantastic ending!
Watcher666
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5 posted 10-21-1999 09:48 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Good read...liked this!

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Moonlight
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6 posted 10-21-1999 04:29 PM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

thanks everybody! i got a better response to this one than I thought I would...
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