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Moonlight
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

0 posted 1999-10-13 09:19 PM


Hold me
While the piano chords
Strike in my head and
The rain rolls down my window
Hold me
While my my body rests
Safe in your strong arms
Dreaming soft thoughts of you & I.
Hold me
Closer than you've ever before
While I take in the sweet smell
Of your skin
Hold me
Because you missed me today
and you've been waiting for this
small moment for hours.
Hold me
While these tears flow
Across my cheeks because
You have to leave me again.

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www.auburn.edu/~fergum1
~*Only when it is dark enough can you see the stars*~




[This message has been edited by Moonlight (edited 10-13-1999).]

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-10-13 09:21 PM


Excellent...words from your heart can never be wrong. Nicely done
DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-10-13 09:24 PM


Well written my dear friend.

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Nothing is worse than sorrow,
except perhaps disdain.
I'll be myself tomorrow,
tonight I'll feel the pain.

DreamEvil©



Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-18 10:27 PM


Sooooooo touching!

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Denise

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