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Julisha66
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Clarkrange, Tennessee USA


0 posted 10-13-1999 09:06 PM       View Profile for Julisha66   Email Julisha66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julisha66

Please give me your opinion on this, should I put this in my son's high school yearbook?


It seems like only yesterday that we were
blessed with our first born son.

As we look back in time through all the
memories and the photographs we have collected, we wonder, how could it happen
so fast?

Our little boy is growing up.

Graduation time is here and we are extremely
proud of your many accomplishments. For the
first time we realize our little boy has
grown up.

We love you and wish for you a very rewarding
life filled with love, happiness and success.
Enjoy your future!!!


Any suggestions anyone?
© Copyright 1999 Julisha66 - All Rights Reserved
Richard 33
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glen easton, wv usa


1 posted 10-14-1999 12:20 AM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Just one, it's fine just the way it is.


Once an empty nest, once a tear in a mother's
eye!!!

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 10-14-1999).]
Julisha66
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2 posted 10-14-1999 01:10 AM       View Profile for Julisha66   Email Julisha66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julisha66

Thank you for taking the time to read and give me your opinion.
Isis
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3 posted 10-14-1999 02:13 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Perfect the way it is!! If it was too long or too mushy it may embarrass him. Get to it, and send it to the school.

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-14-1999 08:51 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I like it, can't see him having any problem with it
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