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Rhiannon
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since 1999-07-28
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Fayetteville, TN USA

0 posted 1999-10-13 08:00 PM


Easily amused

And

Easily confused

And

My heart may be breaking

And

My foundation may be shaking

But

My smile is still pasted on

This magic we've created

Has so easily faded

And

You live your painted rainbows

And I live my cloudy days

So easily fooled by your innocent glances

You sweet little words hang like

Moss on my drab little house of illusion

I'm living in seclusion

How easily you feel me out

How easily you forget my love


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The night is my companion
The solitude my guide
Would I spend forever here
And not be satisfied?
Sarah MacLachlan, "Possession"

© Copyright 1999 Rhiannon - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-14 11:07 PM


Very good, Rhiannon, I enjoyed this poem!

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Denise

Denise
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2 posted 1999-10-22 09:50 PM


Had to bring this back up! So beautiful in its simplicity.

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Denise

Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
3 posted 1999-10-23 01:01 AM


beautiful poem... reminiscent of a particular time in my life..

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-23 04:37 AM


Liked this one....well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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