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A Romantic Choice

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U K Hero
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0 posted 10-13-1999 06:48 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for U K Hero

A ROMANTIC CHOICE


{I remember it vividly,
Twas a long time ago,
For heaven hath not her beauty
Nor earth a matching glow}


I awake
From mordacious slumber
My thoughts distracted and lost
A sultry window, lies yonder
‘Tis covered in pontifical frost,
The light
It shines though brightly
And permutates O’er the room
Touching all, so politely,
In a vaporous, woven, loom.

I peer
For ages
At the heart of that glistening light
Imagination, a conjure of images,
Angels, dancing on adolescent flight;
Each skip, and hop
In haste, they drop_ a stream of heavenly dust
I rub my eyes in disbelief
For this vision’s too much to trust.

The illume
Duth shine, a little brighter now
It hooves in deliberation, to our bed,
O woman, will you not wake up?
And join, in this, my dream instead;
Its lustre,
Enfolds your body
A storm of heavens embrace,
The dust within it smiling
To see your cherub’s face.




The angels
They are beaten
As they gaze upon a breast,
The dusts momentum fallen
For your love, they can not best;
Heaven
Hath failed_ your beauty to equate
And angels, their wings curtailed
For on clouds forlorn, they now debate,
And thus-
I write, my ink and quill my voice
At their romantic, but impetuous, choice.


UK Hero
© Copyright 1999 Ulysses Hero - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 10-13-1999 07:04 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is most passionately and beautifully put.
Munda
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2 posted 10-13-1999 07:04 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Sigh....Sigh....SIGH...BEAUTIFUL !
Pepper
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yes, so very beautiful U K.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 10-14-1999 12:53 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

A Nice romantic choice! Lovely....just lovely...
Isis
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5 posted 10-14-1999 02:05 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I'm looking for another word other than beautiful, but finding one now fails me, so I better go with aaaahhhhh Beautiful!!

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


U K Hero
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6 posted 10-14-1999 03:24 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

thanks girls (no guys strange)

Isis I love your sense of humour how about charming, enchanting, seductive, sugestive and lots of other words with 'tive' on the end (titter), thankyou.
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7 posted 10-18-1999 10:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Charming, enchanting, seductive, suggestive, suplerlative, AND BEAUTIFUL! (oh, and exquisite too!)

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Denise
 
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