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The Carpenter's Tool Chest

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Ohme
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0 posted 10-13-1999 12:03 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

The Carpenter's Tool Chest

'What if' is a simple tool examining 'I had'
and gives some possibilities that
might have made you glad.
But it's not for construction.
And there's nothing it can change.
It doesn't even give us hope that it can rearrange.

What if is a mighty tool applied against 'I would'.
Intensifying power
when assisted by 'I could'
But if you need the strongest tool
you'll take out of the chest
the one that says 'a loving heart' and put it to the test.

Then if you want to use what if
to check out some I had
The carpentry is so unique
and built with perfect would.
© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 10-13-1999 12:08 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Well, this likes me very much...well done!
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 10-13-1999 12:42 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Ohme,
Ohmy, I will, I would, I could, Oh hell
I thought the poem was good.
Munda
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3 posted 10-14-1999 01:53 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Gosh Ohme, you have a way with words. I love this. : )
Pepper
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4 posted 10-14-1999 03:41 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Excellent Ohme !!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Denise
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What if I say this is simply brilliant?!

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Denise
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Why couldn't have I thought of this one
Nicely done
U K Hero
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7 posted 10-15-1999 04:18 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Well thought out
Like the chest no doubt,
You mix and match
Your words of would
If only--
If only I could.

Top notch Ohme, well done
WhtDove
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8 posted 11-07-1999 01:06 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Very unique! A great one I think!

It's a thinker it is...very well done Ohme!
Watcher666
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9 posted 11-07-1999 02:02 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
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