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Watcher666
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0 posted 10-13-1999 08:13 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Always hiding
Time biding
Never residing
Watching

Darkness hides me
No one can see
Am I behind the tree?
Watching

In shadows I abide
Taking the free ride
Stalking your hide
Watching

You'll never know
How far I will go
Just enjoy the show
Watching

Maybe I'm not there
So just stop and stare
Careful of the glare
Watching

Tonight as you sleep
Your dreams I will reap
Your heart I shall keep
Ever Watching



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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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U K Hero
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1 posted 10-13-1999 08:15 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

I liked the way you played with the words well done.
Ohme
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2 posted 10-13-1999 08:35 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


Yes, Watcher, I too like the choice of words. It is very interesting.
Thanks

Ohme
Sunshine
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3 posted 10-13-1999 10:16 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Enjoy the show...
Martie
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4 posted 10-13-1999 10:37 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Watching seems to feed the need for connection here, scary and sad.
Munda
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5 posted 10-13-1999 11:26 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Nice play with words indeed, but sad too....just come out and play !
Michael
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6 posted 10-13-1999 04:51 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Hey, Watcher,
This is quite voyeuristic to say the least. I agree with the above, just come out and play...we ain't all bad you know.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.


Systematic Decay
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7 posted 10-14-1999 01:01 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Interesting poem....I feel like Im being watched....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Watcher666
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8 posted 10-14-1999 11:18 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

I know you well....I've been watching!! And I'm here to play!! Thank-You for your replies

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Nan
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9 posted 10-17-1999 02:47 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Turnabout's fair play...
wannabe_poet
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10 posted 10-17-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for wannabe_poet   Email wannabe_poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wannabe_poet

Nice one.. Scary though.
Denise
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Great poem, chilling though!

Nan-very cute!

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Denise


[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-17-1999).]
Severn
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12 posted 10-18-1999 12:35 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Dark one there - I like it.
 
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