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Fear(Challenge from DreamEvil)

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Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


0 posted 10-13-1999 03:47 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

Ice invades my spine
I am chilled to the bone
As if by design
I’m sitting here alone

I am chilled to the bone
My muscles grow tense
I’m sitting here alone
Planning my defense

My muscles grow tense
In my chair I freeze
Planning my defense
While praying, “God please…”

In my chair I freeze
As if by design
While praying, “God please…”
Ice invades my spine


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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 10-13-1999 04:47 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Good deal with the real fear my dear.

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Nothing is worse than sorrow,
except perhaps disdain.
I'll be myself tomorrow,
tonight I'll feel the pain.

DreamEvil©


Watcher666
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2 posted 10-13-1999 07:14 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Vivid imagery.I could feel your fear.Very well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
JennyLee
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3 posted 10-13-1999 09:06 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Again.....I like very much.
The imagery is so fine tuned!!

Great Work !

Jenny
 
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