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Heavens Mist

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The Jackal
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0 posted 10-13-1999 12:23 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

a plea
for better time
last silence
we have coming
all things go must stop
all that floats
has got to drop
as slowly
as you think
we all drive
ourselves to the brink
waiting to become someones lunch
you either eat the sour world
or it eats you
one solemn bite at a time
burn you down to size
your waving goodbye
another tragedy
fools strategy
gone amiss
deep down
you can feel
heavens mist..
marking hope upon
your lips...




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© Copyright 1999 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 10-13-1999 03:09 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

last couple of lines are real powerful

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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2 posted 10-13-1999 07:07 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Deeply thought provoking once again Sir.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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