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A whole new day erupts...

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Master
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0 posted 10-12-1999 11:37 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

A whole new day erupts
A needle with a thread--
The wind is pierced with drops
Of tears November bled
The leaves twirl in their flight
So weak and short of breath
While reaching for new height
They stumble into depth
Of liquid colored skies
Where heaven quickly smears
And echoes of their cries
Roam through deserted years


[This message has been edited by Master (edited 10-27-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-12-1999 11:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful imagery here, Master! I enjoyed this much!

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2 posted 10-13-1999 06:26 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely verse!

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3 posted 10-13-1999 09:12 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautifully done master a well written piece
Master
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4 posted 10-13-1999 03:15 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks, thanks and thanks!
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5 posted 10-26-1999 11:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Isn't this beautiful?!

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Master
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6 posted 10-27-1999 12:10 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Wow, thanks Denise I though this one was done forever, but you brought it back to life!
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Me thinks this one has a life of its own!

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