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Of love fair won
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Of love fair won |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of love fair won It has been read, written, tongued and sung. It has been groaned, moaned, fettered and hung. It has been sworn, torn and brought to the gun. All in the name of love fair won. It has been harnessed, bridled left undone It has flown the stars, mars, tattooed our bun. It has captured in praise the moon and sun. All in the name of love fair won. It has turned the world to wild profanity And some times very close to insanity. Yellow, white, red, brown, what ever someone. All in the name of love fair won It has smitten some kings to uncrown their crown. And it has turned much of the world upside down. But mostly it's the broken hearts by the ton. All in the name of love fair won. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, love does have a mighty power, doesn't it? (perhaps too much, sometimes, I think!)...ooops, there I go thinking again!  ------------------ Denise |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Great poem se, you covered all the bases,I would also like to add that love died sacrificely.  For you and me! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Seymour, this is wonderful, loved it ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Very well done indeed SEY! I liked the way you mixed the words....gave it the feeling of going very fast (I'm sure intentionaly!) |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent....Liked this one Much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, You can think, as long as you don't mention it to anyone, who knows? Thank you so much for the prompt responce. A Romantic, Not all the bases but enough thank you for the read. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 10-13-1999).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed. Nice work. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Oh this one really got me. You covered a lot of territory there. Nicely done. Ohme |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice one! |
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