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Eternally Maimed
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Eternally Maimed |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This is my body, Ugly and scarred This is my soul, Tortured and marred These are my eyes, Beaten and dull These are my thoughts, Storm withough lull This is my heart, Blackened and sore These are my morals, I feel like a whore This is my tongue, Silent and shamed This is me, Eternally maimed ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
 *huggles* I don't know what to say other than I know the feeling! Let me know what goes on with what we were talking about OK?  *huggles*------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Such a sad portrait of what is a beautiful woman,wonderful and poet and muse. May the Sun shine brighter for you today. Well done verse. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, although sad, this is incredible in it's literary aspect, nicely written |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I would like to think that the emotion express is a feeling from times long ago. If not, the poet in me wants to make it better. Hugs! Ohme |
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