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Eternally Maimed

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Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


0 posted 10-12-1999 10:17 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

This is my body,
Ugly and scarred
This is my soul,
Tortured and marred
These are my eyes,
Beaten and dull
These are my thoughts,
Storm withough lull
This is my heart,
Blackened and sore
These are my morals,
I feel like a whore
This is my tongue,
Silent and shamed
This is me,
Eternally maimed


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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 10-13-1999 12:59 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

*huggles* I don't know what to say other than I know the feeling! Let me know what goes on with what we were talking about OK? *huggles*


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Watcher666
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2 posted 10-13-1999 06:45 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Such a sad portrait of what is a beautiful woman,wonderful and poet and muse. May the Sun shine brighter for you today. Well done verse.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 10-13-1999 09:17 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow, although sad, this is incredible in it's literary aspect, nicely written
Ohme
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4 posted 10-13-1999 09:34 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


I would like to think that the emotion express is a feeling from times long ago.

If not, the poet in me wants to make it better. Hugs!

Ohme
 
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