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Sunshine
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0 posted 10-12-1999 11:24 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ramblings

The wanting blankness of you
waiting, yearning to be filled
waiting, impatient for the thrill
of phrases of gold, just for you.

White, oh so pallid, pale you are
never any other palest shade
for to be so tinted, colored
would decrease what is said.

Black now on white, do write
more and more, fill the core
even fill in all the edges
paper beseeching pen for more.

Which came first, paper or ink?
‘Tis a thought to give you think.

12 October, 1999
©KRJ



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Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-12-1999 11:54 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

you have got me thinking Sunshine.....Well Done my friend.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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2 posted 10-12-1999 11:57 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I've come to expect you to always be first in line - no matter what I put out there. Thank you Pepper, for your constant vigilance and friendship. It is welcomed, indeed!
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 10-12-1999 10:08 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

EXCELLENT!!! Sunshine, this is really great, thanks for posting, I love it!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 10-12-1999 10:27 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
T'is nothing much to give you think
For it's you before the paper and ink.
Enjoyed the read.
Watcher666
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5 posted 10-13-1999 05:49 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done! I liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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Hoot, your "Excellent" thrills me much;

Sy, I had not thought of it that way, but I like it, yes I do...

Watcher666, thank you for reading, and commenting. And welcome to the group.
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7 posted 10-16-1999 08:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sunshine you just keep right on ramblin'!

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Denise
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Very well done, Sunshine. Your ideas are always innovative.
Sunshine
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Denise and 'Deer, your comments are always appreciated. 'Deer, "Innovative?" I've got a long, long way to catch up with yours...
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10 posted 10-17-1999 10:16 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Made me smile again, you did
I always love your ramblings, Sunshine...keep it up!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

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Thank you Caroline, for sharing with me your smiles...{~,^}
Sally S.
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You have my vote as well....I like it.
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13 posted 10-18-1999 09:49 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I'll add a "me, too!" *G* I like this!
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Sally & Suthern - thanks for your replies!
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