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Leprechauns

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ddog069
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0 posted 10-12-1999 09:47 AM       View Profile for ddog069   Email ddog069   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ddog069

Once upon a time there was a leprechaun who was looking for his gold he looked up and down the rainbows,but all he found was mold.He was furious,but mostly curious.He was wanting to jump and shout,but all he did was pout.He cried and cried for hours.Then he started thinking if i'm going to get my gold back I need to call Justin cause he has magical powers.He made a wish and my gold appeared before my eyes.

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ddog069
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1 posted 10-12-1999 09:55 AM       View Profile for ddog069   Email ddog069   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ddog069

I loved your poem will you write all you know about them??

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Donald Monday
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cute Donald....thanks for sharing....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Richard 33
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3 posted 10-12-1999 03:20 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

I had a problem like that once, and I called
the orkin man, after that everything was just
fine!! (he)(he) just kidding, it was cut, I
liked it.
Watcher666
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4 posted 10-13-1999 05:21 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nice poem,but it would flow better with line breaks.For example:
Once upon a time ther was a leprechan
Who was looking for his gold
He looked up and down the rainbows
But all he found was mold

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Denise
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5 posted 10-18-1999 10:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I love leprechauns! And this poem!


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