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Wiping up the night

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The Jackal
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0 posted 10-12-1999 02:20 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

i wipe up the night
the messes of frenzies
carrying me to distance
untold..unknown
where i have the good life
so special like you
underneath twilight's blues
never a lonely day
or a sudden night ray
to whisk me away
im so high
so far in love
the mud..the gravel
the pain.. the pity
wait.. duck now
reality just missed me..




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Saxoness
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1 posted 10-12-1999 02:45 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

I love the last two lines! Wonderful!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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2 posted 10-12-1999 07:00 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Like this one much!

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mia
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3 posted 10-17-1999 06:20 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

I agree with Saxoness, I really like the two last lines... Great poem...
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