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The Jackal
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0 posted 10-12-1999 02:19 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

i knew
this could be the sign
of things to come
sometimes im not the only one
feeling this way
dying here
soaking up fear
tell me your life
so i might hide you
in what little light
I can provide
a sparkle
cheap imitation
for others salvation
speak to me
like you care
as if im the only one
you truly want here..


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© Copyright 1999 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 10-12-1999 02:47 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

wow, very nice. Such a way with words, John.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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2 posted 10-12-1999 07:02 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Loved the line....'speak to me.....as if you care'.....well done!

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Magic...the art of illusion....poetry....the art of the heart


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3 posted 10-26-1999 11:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

As I have said before, you have a fine talent. This is just one example!

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Denise
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4 posted 10-26-1999 11:52 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Liked this piece much Jackal!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Julie
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5 posted 10-27-1999 01:06 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Your closing statements are always so well done...bringing everything together for a perfect weave.
I like it! I like it!
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