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i love making love to you.

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amber
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0 posted 10-12-1999 01:35 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

i love making love to you...

the softness in your eyes,
the beauty you find in me,
the way you stare into my soul,
and know im all youll ever need.

i love making love to...

the man you have become,
my soul, and my vision,
to you my past slips away,
my mistakes, beyond recognition.

i love making love...

with all my heart and soul,
lost breathless in your kiss,
i thought my love was to much to hold,
but i never knew it would feel like this.


i love making...

the world outside fade away,
lost in your heartbeat,
and the sweet silence that surrounds,
every time our bodies meet.

i love...

every move you make,
every tear thats ever fallen,
every single mistake,
that stopped my heart from stalling.

i...

can still feel you,
still smell your skin,
still kiss you in my mind,
and hold you like i did then.

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im always the one to say im sorry, but have never once forgave myself......
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Tara Simms
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1 posted 10-12-1999 01:43 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Perfect!

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How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
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Dragoness
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2 posted 10-12-1999 06:54 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Sweet and sensual!

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Magic...the art of illusion....poetry....the art of the heart


hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 10-12-1999 09:55 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderfully written, the form works well for this piece
Dark Angel
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4 posted 10-12-1999 10:41 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Amber, yes wonderfully written, loved it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Pepper
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5 posted 10-12-1999 10:53 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

lovely amber.....so beautifully written.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 10-16-1999 06:33 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Amber: Exquisite..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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