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Severn
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0 posted 10-11-1999 07:08 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Severn

(Companion piece for 'Souls
Apart' in Prose)



My love -
you swept in and
stormed the safeholds
of my heart

I have no shelter now

My soul -
you whisper-kissed and
freed fervent life
with every breath

I own no anchor now

My heart -
you listened soft and
stemmed the implore
of my sleeping love

I'm driftwood on the sand now

My dove -
you broke all trance and
captured close
my stifled loneliness

I'm safe against all tides now

My love -
you swept in and
stormed the safeholds
of my heart...

I have your shelter now

I'm surceased within you now

KM 9.10.99
© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
Seaangel
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1 posted 10-11-1999 08:27 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

WOW WOW WOW WOW
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 10-12-1999 02:22 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Ok, as much as I hate to say it....
Ditto the above.
WOW WOW WOW WOW

K- do you know that YOU never cease to amaze me? You are the breath of life that makes each day go by.
Beautiful images here, and clever usage of words...."whisper-kissed" ...Love that!
Saxoness
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3 posted 10-12-1999 02:43 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

You are one of the reasons I'm sitting here at 1:45am. Beautifully breathtaking.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Dragoness
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4 posted 10-12-1999 06:59 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Absolutely Beautiful!

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Magic...the art of illusion....poetry....the art of the heart


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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5 posted 10-12-1999 09:46 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderful words of a soul released by the power of love. You could have spoke my heart with this one Severn. BRAVO!!
Nan
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6 posted 10-13-1999 08:54 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Awesome - It's wonderful right from the title on through to the last word...
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 10-13-1999 08:59 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
Have to agree with Nan on this one. *L*
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


8 posted 10-13-1999 11:05 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

My star, you do ever have a problem with your name don't you?? LOL
This goes back up because I miss you right now and wanted to feel closer. Alas, reading your words only makes it that much more difficult.
Severn
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9 posted 10-13-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

sea - a wow for you in return.
Angel - I know the feeling - I'm witholding getting on-line at home until my exams are over! Thankyou.
Dragoness - hugs - don't leave us!
Hoot - a heart released indeed. Thankyou!
Nan - Thankyou!!!
Seymour - you are too mean!!!!! Poor sunshine.... thankyou though my friend.

My Christopher - The only reason I can amaze you is because you've given me the inspiration for all my words. So THANKYOU, and I miss you right back - hearing your voice only made it worse....
 
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