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papabear
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0 posted 1999-10-11 11:02 AM


Tonight I Know She Must Go

I want to say please stay, yet I can not utter the words.
So I stare at her longingly, hoping my silent thoughts are heard.

Is it to soon to request a night of passion;
or is my apprehension just a bit old fashion.

Does considering her feelings show that I really care;
or is the thought of rejection to much for my pride to bear.

Holding her in my arm, I feel the longing deep within my heart;
or is that simply the blood rushing to that other part.

But there's no rush, because I know one day her love I will know;
or is that just what I tell myself, because Tonight I Know She Must Go.

© Copyright 1999 Cozean Louis Hedrick - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
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1 posted 1999-10-11 01:24 PM


Nicely done

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-10-11 02:07 PM


Great last lines
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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3 posted 1999-10-11 06:38 PM


I love the way you've put this into words !
Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
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Wisconsin
4 posted 1999-10-11 08:17 PM


Great poem. Beautifully written .
papabear
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5 posted 1999-10-12 08:04 AM


Dragoness, Hoot_owl_rn, Munda, and Dolphins3 thank you........
Pepper
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6 posted 1999-10-12 08:30 AM


really enjoyed this piece papabear......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 1999-10-12 09:08 AM


Papabear,
Well done.

Tara Simms
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8 posted 1999-10-12 09:52 AM


Well done.
papabear
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9 posted 1999-10-14 07:51 AM


Pepper, Seymour Tabin, Tara Simms......... Thank you all .........
passing shadows
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