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Tonight I Know She Must Go

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papabear
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Tonight I Know She Must Go

I want to say please stay, yet I can not utter the words.
So I stare at her longingly, hoping my silent thoughts are heard.

Is it to soon to request a night of passion;
or is my apprehension just a bit old fashion.

Does considering her feelings show that I really care;
or is the thought of rejection to much for my pride to bear.

Holding her in my arm, I feel the longing deep within my heart;
or is that simply the blood rushing to that other part.

But there's no rush, because I know one day her love I will know;
or is that just what I tell myself, because Tonight I Know She Must Go.
© Copyright 1999 Cozean Louis Hedrick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-11-1999 01:24 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Nicely done

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

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Great last lines
Munda
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3 posted 10-11-1999 06:38 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I love the way you've put this into words !
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4 posted 10-11-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Great poem. Beautifully written .
papabear
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5 posted 10-12-1999 08:04 AM       View Profile for papabear   Email papabear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit papabear's Home Page   View IP for papabear

Dragoness, Hoot_owl_rn, Munda, and Dolphins3 thank you........
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really enjoyed this piece papabear......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Seymour Tabin
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Papabear,
Well done.
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Well done.
papabear
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Pepper, Seymour Tabin, Tara Simms......... Thank you all .........
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