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candace
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since 09-05-99
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0 posted 10-11-1999 10:53 AM       View Profile for candace   Email candace   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for candace

I have always wondered what
my purpose is in life.

But what I have learned is
that it really isnt important.

We live on this earth to hurt
others and to be hurt by them.

Many call this growing up.
I call it misery.

We are all sinners and know
nothing about truth.

What we know is always changing
by the optical illusion of what
we see.

Never real. Never fake.

For only the beholder of the view
can make the judgement
© Copyright 1999 candace - All Rights Reserved
INclan
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1 posted 10-11-1999 01:23 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

I disagree.....
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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2 posted 10-11-1999 02:09 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I fail to agree your line of thought on this piece, I do not live to hurt and do not define myself by what others think....but, we are here not to judge peoples views but rather to read their poetry. This piece seems to flow well, I'm curious to see something else.

[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 10-12-1999).]
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