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Some kind of magic

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 09-23-1999
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0 posted 10-10-1999 11:38 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Passion is fire in the heat of the night
when holding and touching could'nt feel more right

The soft little touches, the kisses so sweet
like a match to a candle, two things that must meet

Our bodies the canvas, our mouth is the brush
softly and slowly, not meant to be rushed

Only one thing to think of in this darkness so great
I want to be here forever, to see what we can create

Nothing can top this, no feeling so real
not a worldly possession like this makes us feel

This is heaven on earth, all worries are gone
your mind travels free, hearts sing a new song

Yesterday's over, tomorrow's not here
right now is before us, to live and hold dear

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
© Copyright 1999 B.J.Howe - All Rights Reserved
Julie
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1 posted 10-11-1999 12:00 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Really like the message here Thunder.


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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



Dragoness
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2 posted 10-11-1999 12:35 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Nicely done.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


3 posted 10-11-1999 01:19 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Exactly Thunder!
Live in the now, carpe diem, etc....
good job!
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-11-1999 02:40 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

"Our bodies the canvas, our mouth is the brush"
EXCELLENT line .....wow, why couldn't I have thought of that??
ThUnDeRkYsS
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5 posted 10-13-1999 12:14 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Thank you very much for your kind thoughts and opinions. This is the first of its kind out of my mind into poetry, didnt know how it would turn out, just sort of typed what was on mind at the time. I greatly appreciate the input from each of you
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6 posted 10-18-1999 10:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Magical, indeed!

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7 posted 10-18-1999 10:46 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I'm with HootOwl on this...the line I really liked was "Our bodies the canvas, our mouths the brush..." ahhh....that is absolutely superb!! Me likes this alot !! Will definately be reading more of your work! Haven't got to read much lately, but will !!!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

 
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