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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Why me? Why not? Why not him? Because. Why not her? Is easier this way. Whats easier? The torment. You mean this? Yes. But why? Because it's pleasurable. What is? Watching you suffer. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Nicely done  ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Dark and depressing. Is this what you were going for? |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
actually that is what i was going for, i also spoke of the undeniable truth in life that peoples suffering is pleasurable to those that look down upon us ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Great Poem But is the him you and the her the One Her? Or is it about someone else, or just two random, unspecified people? I am confused. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
SYS the him and her in this poem were people in general in other words i asked why me there are billions of others out there.And how could you think I would wish my misery upon Miranda i could never do that, So not the her definately wasnt Miranda. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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