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0 posted 10-10-1999 10:45 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suicidal dreams

Why me?
Why not?
Why not him?
Because.
Why not her?
Is easier this way.
Whats easier?
The torment.
You mean this?
Yes.
But why?
Because it's pleasurable.
What is?
Watching you suffer.

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© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
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1 posted 10-10-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Nicely done

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

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2 posted 10-10-1999 11:00 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Dark and depressing. Is this what you were going for?
suicidal dreams
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3 posted 10-11-1999 10:26 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

actually that is what i was going for, i also spoke of the undeniable truth in life that peoples suffering is pleasurable to those that look down upon us

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Systematic Decay
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Great Poem
But is the him you and the her the One Her?
Or is it about someone else, or just two random, unspecified people? I am confused.

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suicidal dreams
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5 posted 10-12-1999 08:28 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

SYS the him and her in this poem were people in general in other words i asked why me there are billions of others out there.And how could you think I would wish my misery upon Miranda i could never do that, So not the her definately wasnt Miranda.

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