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Painted Butterfly Wings

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 10-10-1999 10:18 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Dew filled mists gently soar
Upon painted butterfly wings
Moonlight brushed glittery gold
Bathing a jewel toned horizon
Clouds laced within midnight skies
Giant oaks support the heavens
The foliage crimson, fiery, blazing
Falling in a harvest rainbow
Streams bubble with elfish laughter
Their eyes gleaming within the foam
Fae whispers kiss a sultry breeze
Wings fluttering with temptation
Starlight sweeps fluidly
Like tearstains upon navy silk
Never completely erased
Visions silver framed
Within my wandering memory
Lost once, but flown back
To my weary soul
Upon painted butterfly wings.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 10-10-1999 10:37 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful imagery, this is lovely
Dragoness
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2 posted 10-10-1999 10:45 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Very Sweet....liked this one!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Alwye
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3 posted 10-11-1999 08:42 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Thank you both.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


Nan
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4 posted 10-13-1999 08:49 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Awesome - So, when I adopt you, the rule is - at least one poem a day.... That'll be mandatory....
Severn
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5 posted 10-13-1999 06:22 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This sounds like a song, Alwye...beautiful.
Munda
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6 posted 10-13-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Wow,Alwye, may I put my weary soul upon your painted butterflies wings ?
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7 posted 10-13-1999 08:27 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I like this stylistic departure from your recent works. Free verse rarely grabs my attention, but this does it well. Good deal my friend.

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Nothing is worse than sorrow,
except perhaps disdain.
I'll be myself tomorrow,
tonight I'll feel the pain.

DreamEvilŠ


Alwye
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8 posted 10-13-1999 10:41 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Munda--Anytime, my poetic friend, anytime..

Thank you all very much for your kindness.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


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9 posted 10-15-1999 12:33 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

this was so pretty it deserved a bump back to the top

*hugs*
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10 posted 10-15-1999 12:36 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Breathtakingly beautiful!

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Denise
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11 posted 10-15-1999 12:57 AM       View Profile for Deverone   Email Deverone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deverone

This was beautiful.... I closed my eyes and listened for the first time with my heart, and I heard the sounds you speak of, and upon opening them my eyes truly saw the wonderous spectrum of colors glowing brightly before me.

Truly enjoyable.
Thanks for sharing.

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Deverone
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This piece is stunning Alwye.

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Alwye
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Wow, thank you all for your kindness.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


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lovely write
 
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