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Severn
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0 posted 10-10-1999 10:12 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Severn

Caught in your irrevocable
Hasp of soul-beating wings, I
Relish your sensitivities, and
Intriguing reach of depthless deeps.
Such peace-wrenched bliss, I'm ever
Torn that you, my soul, my
Only, live beyond a cruel cold sea;
Painting your life's art, your love I
Hear exquisite, yet yearn for touch.
Ever safe, you reside in me
Resting wild, Dove of my life, flight-free.

KM 9.10.99

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...he knows the needs of my passions, he sates the searching of my soul...
© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 10-10-1999 10:38 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh Severn, this is truly beautiful. Here's hoping that your dove flies across the ocean to you real soon dear
Poet deVine
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2 posted 10-10-1999 10:44 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Acrostically speaking this is fantastic... such love you have shines for him...
Christopher
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3 posted 10-10-1999 10:45 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Amazing. K- words fail me often while my thoughts wish to speak of what's inside. You leave me breathless, wordless, and ever on my toes. The breadth of your talent and caring ever leaves me at a loss, and feeling inadequate. I only hope I can match your hopes love.
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4 posted 10-10-1999 10:47 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Beautiful....well done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Severn
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5 posted 10-10-1999 10:47 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Oh Lord - you already have....
Severn
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6 posted 10-10-1999 10:49 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Ruth - thankyou! That's my only wish right now!
PDV - thanks! - it was my first acrostic, and since I have such great inspiration it wasn't that hard!
Severn
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7 posted 10-11-1999 12:03 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Dragoness- didn't mean to miss you - thanks to you too!
Justbleu
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8 posted 10-16-1999 03:34 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

That was very pretty...I enjoyed reading this very much!! Hope he flies to you soon!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."
Denise
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9 posted 10-16-1999 07:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Soooooooo Beautiful!

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Denise
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 10-16-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Severn,
You really reached down for this one.
Excellent.
caroline
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11 posted 10-16-1999 07:34 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Severn, I think you have the most beautiful way of expressing how you feel This is so excellent!!!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Skyfyre
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12 posted 10-16-1999 08:21 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

This was great! I didn't even notice that it was an acrostic, because it didn't seem forced at all, as acrostics sometimes can. Very well done, Severn ... and a sweet tribute to boot.

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

 
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