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My Dove |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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Caught in your irrevocable Hasp of soul-beating wings, I Relish your sensitivities, and Intriguing reach of depthless deeps. Such peace-wrenched bliss, I'm ever Torn that you, my soul, my Only, live beyond a cruel cold sea; Painting your life's art, your love I Hear exquisite, yet yearn for touch. Ever safe, you reside in me Resting wild, Dove of my life, flight-free. KM 9.10.99 ------------------ ...he knows the needs of my passions, he sates the searching of my soul... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Severn, this is truly beautiful. Here's hoping that your dove flies across the ocean to you real soon dear  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Acrostically speaking this is fantastic... such love you have shines for him...  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Amazing. K- words fail me often while my thoughts wish to speak of what's inside. You leave me breathless, wordless, and ever on my toes. The breadth of your talent and caring ever leaves me at a loss, and feeling inadequate. I only hope I can match your hopes love. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Beautiful....well done! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh Lord - you already have.... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ruth - thankyou! That's my only wish right now! PDV - thanks! - it was my first acrostic, and since I have such great inspiration it wasn't that hard! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Dragoness- didn't mean to miss you - thanks to you too! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
That was very pretty...I enjoyed reading this very much!! Hope he flies to you soon!! Bridgette ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soooooooo Beautiful!  ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, You really reached down for this one. Excellent. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Severn, I think you have the most beautiful way of expressing how you feel This is so excellent!!!------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
This was great! I didn't even notice that it was an acrostic, because it didn't seem forced at all, as acrostics sometimes can. Very well done, Severn ... and a sweet tribute to boot. Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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