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Waiting on a Cool Date

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deleeme
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0 posted 10-10-1999 10:03 PM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

O how long I have awaited thy coming
For years now you've been on the verge,
At times you seemed so unlikely--
But now, at last, you're my fervent urge.

How undependable you seem to be
Rarely showing up when expected,
But for some, slipping in ahead of time--
With surprise, having been undetected.

Why must you be e'er so cavalier
To show up only as You please?
Doesn't it get old, Cold Shoulder Receptions?
Or is that something, that with you, agrees?

So I say, you can come already
And together we will stroll out the door,
To Hell with this world, I've a Date with
Death--
And for me, it will last evermore!
© Copyright 1999 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
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1 posted 10-10-1999 10:43 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Nicely done

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-10-1999 10:44 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very deep, this has impact!
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