How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #3 Archive
 Dream Child
 1 2 3 4 5 6
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Dream Child

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 09-21-1999
Posts 28608
California


0 posted 10-10-1999 05:08 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie



Last night loved
he so beautiful
lost in a smile
I made

I looked through my hair
across his skin
and saw soft black rain
sleeting across the pale
land of his thigh

His lips tasted of
summer oceans of laughter

Did gravity take
take that milky brew of seed
into the soft mother of me
to grow

He would hold our child
like the small fragile face
of a flower
© Copyright 1999 Martie Odell-Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 06-05-99
Posts 26302
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


1 posted 10-10-1999 05:15 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Oh, my, this is exquisite. "looking through my hair....". I can't do it but I can imagine it so well. Beautiful.
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


2 posted 10-10-1999 05:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed this very much, Martie!

------------------
Denise
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 07-07-99
Posts 32119
Tamarac Fla


3 posted 10-10-1999 06:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Martie,
Agree with balladeer, I can't look through my hair either, enjoyed the read.
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 09-21-1999
Posts 28608
California


4 posted 10-10-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Thankyou for your words. You can grow it or cut it, but somehow the feeling would be the same I think.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


5 posted 10-10-1999 10:43 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow....this is remarkable. The imagery in this is exquisite and the romance wonderful. Thanks for sharing. BRAVO!!!
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 10-13-1999
Posts 1630


6 posted 10-13-1999 07:58 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Soft and sensual.....lovely!

------------------
Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #3 >> Dream Child Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors