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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 1999-10-10 04:37 PM



Fate has brought you here to me,
Across the waves,
Beyond the seas,

Fate came when I did not expect,
Came in like a whisper,
without a check.

Fate is unseen,
It merges the truest of loves,
A planned action ,

From God above,
No one knows the moment,
The hour upon its visit,

But when Fate comes,
It never leaves,
The one true thing,

The answer to all our hope and dreams.



© Copyright 1999 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
toocute4u_27
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since 1999-10-01
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Holdenville, OK USA
1 posted 1999-10-10 04:39 PM


Beautiful poem, but I would like to think that fate can bring us answers to our hopes and dreams. Although fate's timing is awful sometimes. I loved the poem.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 1999-10-10 04:41 PM


Yes I know what you mean, the timing is weird sometimes!
RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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Champaign, IL
3 posted 1999-10-10 04:42 PM


good poem and thoughts on a deep and sometimes controversial subject

RB

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 1999-10-10 04:52 PM


Thanks Robert, I believe in it!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-10 05:01 PM


Wow, I really like this, I am a true believer in fate and destiny, although I also believe we can change ours to some extent, nothing is written in stone so to speak
Denise
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6 posted 1999-10-10 05:25 PM


Another lovely one!

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Denise

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