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Munda
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0 posted 10-10-1999 03:48 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

This is the answer to "cry of my soul".
I hope you all find this some day. : )

This heart of hers has wandered the worlds,
always in search for an answer, the right words,
In need for a love beyond comprehension,
she does many things to get some attention.
She meets others and hopefully sees,
the promise of a love that is to be.
She fights and holds on when love fades away,
it's gone, in the past, another yesterday.
Knowing this was not the one she seeks,
she struggles and stumbles always in need,
for this one perfect love, will it ever be ?
Many mistakes were made in this life,
but the need is so strong, she just can't deny.

One day she feels a spark, so small,
inviting to listen, she yearns to this call.
Cautious as ever, she does some exploring
Only to find this heart outpouring
real interest, honesty and his inner being,
She looks again, can't believe what she's seeing !
What's this ? A man with patience and beauty ?
A heart as longing for the perfect as she?
Is she dreaming ? Or being mislead ?
There's no mischief ! Not even the threat !
This heart touches her deepest true feelings
speaks to her soul, feels like a healing
And still she wonders, analyzes and denies
And finally, finally surrenders and cries
Could this be true ? The one she still seeks ?
Is it fantasy, dream, or only her needs ?

This heartís so beautiful, there's love and tender care
It makes her tremble all these wonders to share.
Will she be hurt ... ... ... will she dare ?
Embrace these wonders and let fear be done ?
She has to give in for she knows he's the one.
She may stop her search for now she may rest
She's found true love in answer to her quest
and knows she will never again be alone
She has found you ... ... ... she's coming home.





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Denise
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1 posted 10-10-1999 03:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is absolutely beautiful, Munda! Very hopeful and romantic!

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Denise
RobertB
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2 posted 10-10-1999 04:39 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

how nice munda.....that is very nice.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Julie
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3 posted 10-10-1999 05:25 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Munda,
This one brought tears to my eyes.



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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-10-1999 09:03 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful..welcome to passions
Munda
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5 posted 10-13-1999 11:05 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

You all make me feel so much part of this family. Thank you. : )
Ayla
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6 posted 10-13-1999 08:55 PM       View Profile for Ayla   Email Ayla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ayla

I love this Munda...beautiful poem.. : )

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The heart is happiest when it beats for others..
deleeme
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7 posted 10-19-1999 10:45 PM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

This was wonderful, Munda, Spoken beautiful like a true romantic--My hats off to you, dear Lady!
Balladeer
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8 posted 10-19-1999 11:15 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Easy to see the romanticism in this one, munda. You put some honest work in this one.
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