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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 1999-10-10 03:48 PM


This is the answer to "cry of my soul".
I hope you all find this some day. : )

This heart of hers has wandered the worlds,
always in search for an answer, the right words,
In need for a love beyond comprehension,
she does many things to get some attention.
She meets others and hopefully sees,
the promise of a love that is to be.
She fights and holds on when love fades away,
it's gone, in the past, another yesterday.
Knowing this was not the one she seeks,
she struggles and stumbles always in need,
for this one perfect love, will it ever be ?
Many mistakes were made in this life,
but the need is so strong, she just can't deny.

One day she feels a spark, so small,
inviting to listen, she yearns to this call.
Cautious as ever, she does some exploring
Only to find this heart outpouring
real interest, honesty and his inner being,
She looks again, can't believe what she's seeing !
What's this ? A man with patience and beauty ?
A heart as longing for the perfect as she?
Is she dreaming ? Or being mislead ?
There's no mischief ! Not even the threat !
This heart touches her deepest true feelings
speaks to her soul, feels like a healing
And still she wonders, analyzes and denies
And finally, finally surrenders and cries
Could this be true ? The one she still seeks ?
Is it fantasy, dream, or only her needs ?

This heart’s so beautiful, there's love and tender care
It makes her tremble all these wonders to share.
Will she be hurt ... ... ... will she dare ?
Embrace these wonders and let fear be done ?
She has to give in for she knows he's the one.
She may stop her search for now she may rest
She's found true love in answer to her quest
and knows she will never again be alone
She has found you ... ... ... she's coming home.






© Copyright 1999 Munda - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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1 posted 1999-10-10 03:58 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Munda! Very hopeful and romantic!

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Denise

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
2 posted 1999-10-10 04:39 PM


how nice munda.....that is very nice.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
3 posted 1999-10-10 05:25 PM


Munda,
This one brought tears to my eyes.



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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-10-10 09:03 PM


Beautiful..welcome to passions
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 1999-10-13 11:05 AM


You all make me feel so much part of this family. Thank you. : )
Ayla
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since 1999-08-31
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6 posted 1999-10-13 08:55 PM


I love this Munda...beautiful poem.. : )

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The heart is happiest when it beats for others..

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
7 posted 1999-10-19 10:45 PM


This was wonderful, Munda, Spoken beautiful like a true romantic--My hats off to you, dear Lady!
Balladeer
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8 posted 1999-10-19 11:15 PM


Easy to see the romanticism in this one, munda. You put some honest work in this one.
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