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H. Arlequin
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0 posted 10-10-1999 02:37 PM       View Profile for H. Arlequin   Email H. Arlequin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit H. Arlequin's Home Page   View IP for H. Arlequin

Postlude

Forgotten, grown old,
busying the days,
little essential,
confused memories scold
from afar, segues
lack the potential
to steer or reform
cloistered attitudes.
While those absent warm
cliched platitudes,
the music retards,
crescendo sotto
voce, bravo regards,
cut flowers...grotto.

--H. Arlequin
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Poems From the Goober Tree http://nathoo.wustl.edu/goober_tree.htm


[This message has been edited by H. Arlequin (edited 10-14-1999).]

[This message has been edited by H. Arlequin (edited 10-25-1999).]
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Denise
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1 posted 10-10-1999 04:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yep, know what you mean! Very well done, says so much with so few words!

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2 posted 10-14-1999 03:32 AM       View Profile for H. Arlequin   Email H. Arlequin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit H. Arlequin's Home Page   View IP for H. Arlequin

Hi Denise,

I revised it and I hope u like
the results as well as the first :-)

HA
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3 posted 10-14-1999 07:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful! You certainly are a master of words!

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4 posted 10-25-1999 07:11 PM       View Profile for H. Arlequin   Email H. Arlequin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit H. Arlequin's Home Page   View IP for H. Arlequin

revised, again .....sigh

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Wow, I can't believe you keep making it better.....hmmmmm, reminds me of something Balladeer said about Barbara Streisand and her striving for perfection in her recording of a particular piece. I guess that is the sign of a truly talented person!
Well done, H.A.!

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Good reading! Nicely done!!

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