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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 1999-10-10 07:13 AM



Tonight is the last poem I shall write,
so I shall say my goodbyes,
before I turn out the light.

Friendship was fun,
for the time it lasted,
misunderstandings came,
then it was blasted,

So often you connnect with people who are funny,
But watch out,
Someone might think its romanticly,

So buyer beware,
of the poems posted here,
You'll end up leaveing,
And shedding some tears,

For romance t'was not what I was after,
Just a few friendships and Dry humor laughter.

But now my spirit is broken,
For I have been seen as something I am not,
A day or two, I will be forgot!

So goodbye to all,
Wish you the best,
Judge ye not!
For God may put your own judgement
to the test.

I hold only forgiveness,
no grudge or bitterness,
My ending prayer,
Is that you accept Jesus!

Farewell to thee!
Sweet, kind, loving friends of mine...
Love from the heart,
It is the loving kind.

© Copyright 1999 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-10 07:44 AM


Interesting verse and perspective but I am confused as to one thing. Why do you wish to leave over a misunderstanding with one individual? It seems a tad excessive if the circumstances you relate are true. Perhaps you should be more clear with your intent from the beginning to avoid misunderstandings such as this in the future. Learn from this, don't run from it. Just my own thoughts on this, though admittedly I know only the one side I see here.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 1999-10-10 09:18 AM


RH....I hope you are really not leaving us....I enjoy your work alot and if you read all your replies, so do many others...I hope you will reconsider....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 1999-10-10 10:34 AM


DE is right - We are all here as individuals - not as extensions of others - Write on!
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-10 11:45 AM


Oh, please don't leave Romantic Heart! We all enjoy your writing and insight. Whatever it was that happened, don't let that make you think that you have to go away. We'd all miss you so much.

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Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-10-1999).]

Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 1999-10-10 04:08 PM


You already know my thoughts on this. You have to do whatever you have to do though, so I'll gainsay not your choice.
A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 1999-10-10 04:18 PM


Yes Chris I do know your thoughts, and thank you for them. Read my latest poem and replies...I am not leaving, I was just in a somber mood last night.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 1999-10-10 11:06 PM


RH...I'm glad you're not leaving, it would be a loss on all our parts
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