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I can't Believe Anymore

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MEGAN
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since 08-16-99
Posts 17
Cottonwood, Ca United States


0 posted 10-10-1999 03:02 AM       View Profile for MEGAN   Email MEGAN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MEGAN


Cry after cry,
I yelled you name,
Over and over,
yet there was no reply.
Though I still didnít quit.
The time was coming.
Closer and closer after every plea.
Where there was your light
Darkness soon took over.
Tears of my once love for you,
Slowly hit the dark cold earth.
Prayers were never answered.
Hurt just came.
No love nor peace.
Just hurt.
I ask why?
But still thereís no answer.
And I wonder will there ever be one.
Not now.
My heart is too broken.
Too hurt and cold.
Too much despair.
I give up.
I tried and tried,
But no,
you werenít there,
where you promised you would be.
Once I did believe.
But not now.
After all the hurt Iíve suffered.
I just canít believe anymore.
Not after all the hell Iíve been through.




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"Love is a friendship that has caught fire."
© Copyright 1999 MEGAN - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
Posts 1538
Canyon Country, CA


1 posted 10-10-1999 05:29 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

The emotion running through this poem just grabs me. It is almost like I can vision your hurt in the mirrors of my mind. I myself have had this feeling, and you said very well what I never could! Good job!

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Denise
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2 posted 10-10-1999 05:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very heartfelt expression of the loss of love!

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Denise
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