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One Voice of Reason

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 10-10-1999 02:20 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I hear your one voice sing a siren song.
The weight I carry would break Atlas' back.
You make right all things in life that are wrong.
Your love saves me from emotional wrack.

The soul within me was ebony black.
By your love for me my heart is annealed.
My armored shell you were the first to crack.
The faith I have in you is now my shield.

Love's place in my heart has long been concealed.
Your impassioned words are my source of hope.
Every hidden self-doubt you have revealed.
You are what my sanity needs to cope.

My captive spirit your love has set free.
Our souls intertwine in harmony.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
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1 posted 10-10-1999 02:25 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Beautiful....elegent and wonderful.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Lucie
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2 posted 10-10-1999 02:25 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

This is beautiful Dream!
Dark Angel
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3 posted 10-10-1999 02:26 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Soul-brother, this is so beautiful, so beautifully written. Superb!!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


4 posted 10-10-1999 02:28 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Brother, it seems our minds walk the same path this evening, speaking of the damage done to the walls around our hearts. I share your pain as well as your hope.
Well done sir, you have peeked into my soul tonight.
poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 10-10-1999 02:31 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wow Dream, I'm glad you directed me to this piece! Probably the most exquiste I've read yet of yours....beautifully written, and quite magical...you show a warm side here. Nice....

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


RainbowGirl
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6 posted 10-10-1999 04:37 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Glad to see your heart found your fingers again..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Michael
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7 posted 10-10-1999 05:07 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well done Dream, perfect form, flowing with emotion. Love the reference to Atlas.

Good woek.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.


Nan
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8 posted 10-10-1999 10:42 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Watch out, DE - You might have to take the Evil out of your Dream...
Saxoness
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9 posted 10-10-1999 12:23 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

lovely.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Kelly
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10 posted 10-10-1999 01:43 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

I love it. It's so sweet.
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 10-10-1999 01:56 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreamEvil,
You fly like a butterfly, oh my.
Denise
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12 posted 10-10-1999 04:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful, Dream. You have the heart of a true romantic!

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Denise
Shar
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13 posted 10-10-1999 05:29 PM       View Profile for Shar   Email Shar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shar

Much warmth and beauty here. The sun shines through......

*Keep reaching for the stars and they will be yours*
Julie Jordan Scott
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14 posted 10-10-1999 07:24 PM       View Profile for Julie Jordan Scott   Email Julie Jordan Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Julie Jordan Scott's Home Page   View IP for Julie Jordan Scott

Wonderful work straight from the heart to the pen....it is as if your formerly captive spirit leapt from deep within you to pen these eloquently stated words.

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Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker,
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Severn
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15 posted 10-10-1999 09:33 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Now THIS is a Sonnet! And a beautiful one at that - the emotion of which is all too familiar.
Alwye
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16 posted 10-10-1999 10:32 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Pure beauty....truly romantic, my dear friend.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


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17 posted 05-04-2004 03:54 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

excellent!
Artic Wind
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18 posted 11-12-2007 03:16 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed


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