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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-10-10 02:20 AM

I hear your one voice sing a siren song.
The weight I carry would break Atlas' back.
You make right all things in life that are wrong.
Your love saves me from emotional wrack.

The soul within me was ebony black.
By your love for me my heart is annealed.
My armored shell you were the first to crack.
The faith I have in you is now my shield.

Love's place in my heart has long been concealed.
Your impassioned words are my source of hope.
Every hidden self-doubt you have revealed.
You are what my sanity needs to cope.

My captive spirit your love has set free.
Our souls intertwine in harmony.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

1 posted 1999-10-10 02:25 AM

Beautiful....elegent and wonderful.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

2 posted 1999-10-10 02:25 AM

This is beautiful Dream!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-10-10 02:26 AM

Soul-brother, this is so beautiful, so beautifully written. Superb!!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 1999-10-10 02:28 AM

Brother, it seems our minds walk the same path this evening, speaking of the damage done to the walls around our hearts. I share your pain as well as your hope.
Well done sir, you have peeked into my soul tonight.

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

5 posted 1999-10-10 02:31 AM

Wow Dream, I'm glad you directed me to this piece! Probably the most exquiste I've read yet of yours....beautifully written, and quite magical...you show a warm side here. Nice....

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

6 posted 1999-10-10 04:37 AM

Glad to see your heart found your fingers again..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

7 posted 1999-10-10 05:07 AM

Well done Dream, perfect form, flowing with emotion. Love the reference to Atlas.

Good woek.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 1999-10-10 10:42 AM

Watch out, DE - You might have to take the Evil out of your Dream...

Saxoness

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since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

9 posted 1999-10-10 12:23 PM

lovely.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Kelly
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since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

10 posted 1999-10-10 01:43 PM

I love it. It's so sweet.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 1999-10-10 01:56 PM

DreamEvil,
You fly like a butterfly, oh my.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

12 posted 1999-10-10 04:20 PM

This is so beautiful, Dream. You have the heart of a true romantic!

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Denise

Shar
New Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 6
Hesperia, Ca. USA

13 posted 1999-10-10 05:29 PM

Much warmth and beauty here. The sun shines through......

*Keep reaching for the stars and they will be yours*

Julie Jordan Scott
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since 1999-09-19

Posts 146
Bakersfield, CA USA

14 posted 1999-10-10 07:24 PM

Wonderful work straight from the heart to the pen....it is as if your formerly captive spirit leapt from deep within you to pen these eloquently stated words.

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Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker,
but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at
http://www.5passions.com

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

15 posted 1999-10-10 09:33 PM

Now THIS is a Sonnet! And a beautiful one at that - the emotion of which is all too familiar.

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

16 posted 1999-10-10 10:32 PM

Pure beauty....truly romantic, my dear friend.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

17 posted 2004-05-04 03:54 AM

excellent!

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

18 posted 2007-11-12 03:16 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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