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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 10-09-1999 02:24 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Falling above a liquid sun
appears to be a lonely one.
Pulsing, beating, under my skin;
you are lost where I begin.

Tear at your heart, your conscience bear
the pain of denial, fret or care.
Dark and treacherous are your lies.
You are alive in the tortured skies.

Smile at your wisdom, hope to show
the only thought you do not know.
Breezes toss your sandy hair.
You and I are never there.

Wait for the bell, oh lonely guest,
to summon your faith on the unknown quest.
Smile at your lover, oh lovely face.
You hold the honour, I the disgrace.

Watch out the window, never fear;
there never was a villain here
except for you, bearer of sin.
You are lost where I begin.


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U K Hero
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1 posted 10-09-1999 04:02 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

I liked a lot of your words hear Echo.
Systematic Decay
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2 posted 10-09-1999 05:27 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

You are lost where I begin.

Great line, and one I can relate to.


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