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When the Heavens Parted (A dedication)

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Tara Simms
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0 posted 10-09-1999 01:06 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

When the Heavens Parted

I would stare into the sky
Searching for my inspiration.
Eyes cast into the heavens
Hoping for divine interpretation.

My heart yearned to know the meaning,
The beauty of true love
My hopes: a whisper on the wind
My prayers floated above.

Then one day it happened
An angel came into view.
When the heavens parted
It was then that I found you.

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I'm planning on making him a book for Christmas. It would have all the poetry that he's inpsired from me. This will be the dedication.
© Copyright 1999 Tara Simms - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-09-1999 01:33 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful, Tara. And I'm sure he will love your book of poetry. Be sure to include the companion piece in Adult!
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2 posted 10-09-1999 01:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ditto, Tara! Very beautiful!

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Denise
Tara Simms
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Most definitely, Ms. DeVine! This one is going to be the first one in the book. It's companion is going to be the last one.

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
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4 posted 10-09-1999 05:56 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A man would be honored to receive it, Tara. Good work.
Pepper
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5 posted 10-09-1999 06:21 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

what a very wonderful and special Christmas gift! this poem is lovely Tara.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Julie
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6 posted 10-09-1999 08:12 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Absolutely Splendid!
Tara Simms
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Thank you, Julie, Denise, Pepper. Balladeer, let's hope he feels the same way when he receives it.

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/


hoot_owl_rn
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I sent Tyson one the last week Tara, I told him it was the closest I could come to sending myself as my poetry is a part of me. This is lovely
Julie Jordan Scott
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9 posted 10-10-1999 07:12 PM       View Profile for Julie Jordan Scott   Email Julie Jordan Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Julie Jordan Scott's Home Page   View IP for Julie Jordan Scott

Tara, this one is beautiful, I can see the star filled sky, I can see heaven parting, I can see God sending Your Love to you!

Bravo again my dear friend...I am sure he will love this very special gift!

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10 posted 10-10-1999 10:01 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Beautiful, Tara!
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