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Lost at Sea (response to hoot's poem)

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RobertB
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0 posted 10-09-1999 11:38 AM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Lost at Sea

Tell me
please tell me
if can you see...
I mean really see
with your eyes closed
beyond the horizon
where no one goes.
Can you see?
Now explain to me
not in words
but with feelings of emotion
deeper than thoughts
what it is that I see.....
for I am lost
on the sea of feelings
driven by winds over the waves
in a direction not charted by me
but some irresistible force within
Can you feel it...
pulling
tugging
driving us onward
out to sea?
Come sail my ship of emotions
on the Sea of Feelings
finding the way together.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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Denise
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1 posted 10-09-1999 01:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another beauty!

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Denise
Marilyn
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Robert you have a nack for using few words to express great emotion. I wish I had that talent.
Martie
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In this poem I see far feelings, I hear heart beats.
Julie
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4 posted 10-09-1999 08:50 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Wonderful Robert!
RobertB
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5 posted 10-09-1999 10:21 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

the sea is a perfect medium to express so many feelings....is it strange that I am fearful of water?? I would die if I had to swim in the ocean.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Munda
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6 posted 10-09-1999 11:21 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

The Sea of Feelings, the one and true place
where each of us ends up in gaze.
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 10-10-1999 01:18 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice reply Robert, thank you!

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