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Remembering Me(Challenge by Isis)

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Dragoness
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0 posted 10-09-1999 03:13 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

When I'm gone I hope to see
All my friends happy and free
Laughing as they think of me
And remembering how I used to be

Remembering how I'd help them out
Casting aside all their doubts
A hug and a smile was theirs to take
Knowing them I'd never forsake

I want them to remember
Good times and bad
How I could go
From happy to sad

Seeing all the kids and animals I love
Remembering a touch, soft as a dove
Knowing that I'll be watching you
And seeing all of the things that you do

I'd like to think in their hearts I'll remain
And hope this helps them over their pain
But if nothing else they recall of me
Remember the loving heart in me



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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

© Copyright 1999 Dragoness - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 10-09-1999 03:17 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Always sister-mine, until my own last breath.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Christopher
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2 posted 10-09-1999 03:52 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Agreed, and I hope I won't have to fufil that part of the bargain for a long time!
Poet deVine
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3 posted 10-09-1999 07:26 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is very good, and I'm sure this is the way you will be remembered. But you forgot your poetry...your loving heart will shine in that as well!
RobertB
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4 posted 10-09-1999 11:46 AM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

you plan on staying around for a long time to write more poetry...ya hear??

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Denise
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5 posted 10-09-1999 12:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely!

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Denise
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6 posted 10-09-1999 02:55 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

very touching piece......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Shar
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7 posted 10-09-1999 04:05 PM       View Profile for Shar   Email Shar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shar

Very warm, I am sure you will be remembered with love......
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 10-10-1999 12:21 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Just knowing what I do of you on here, I don't think anyone is going to have a problem remembering you like this. Nicely done.
Dragoness
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9 posted 10-12-1999 08:23 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Thank-You all for your replies. This is my final Goodbye.

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Magic...the art of illusion....poetry....the art of the soul

passing shadows
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10 posted 05-04-2004 03:50 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nice
 
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