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Me and Darius

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CaiTheJediPoet
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since 10-09-1999
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0 posted 10-09-1999 01:12 AM       View Profile for CaiTheJediPoet   Email CaiTheJediPoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CaiTheJediPoet

Me and Darius, we got a tale to tell
high quality doesn't mean correct grammar
so if my poem just a little off
don't nail me to the wall.

Me and Darius, we got mint ice cream
The green kind that dissolves on your tongue
And Darius knows when I want to scream
when my chin's hitting the ladder's every rung
Me and Darius, some say we should go out
But we both know we're better as friends
Me and my pug nose, him a Boy Scout
we both know this way it never ends

Me and Darius, we got a new CD
Jimmy Buffet singing Margueritaville
Strange things have been happenin to me
Every time it's playing I get funny chills

Me and Darius both know something's gone wrong
I look at him and get a funny smile
He looks back but it lasts too long
I haven't felt like this for awhile

Me Darius know it can never be
My thoughts keep turning his way just the same
His eyes turn into these crystal pools
but no he's my best friend what a damn shame
Me and Darius we got a thing
everyone knows about but us
I look at him and he looks at me
But it ain't somethin you really discuss.

Me I know this ain't all that great
the lines are short and not too sweet
But to me and Darius, it's all we got
Excuse my grammar now the poem's complete.



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1 posted 10-09-1999 04:40 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Grammer aside.....sweet poem.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

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