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In the garden of Muse

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Master
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0 posted 10-08-1999 11:22 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Dressed up in ten thousand hues
The sky was reflecting the ground
Somewhere in the garden of Muse
Leaves were concealing a noun

Collecting the nectar of thoughts
Poets and writers resembled the bees
Filled with meanings, ideas and words
Ripened verses hung off the trees

Blowing around the worn out cliches
Autumnís breeze swept through the garden
Breathing the mist straight into my face
The evening seemed lively and ardent

Lurking around the face of the clock
Hands of time crept on their toes
And leaving the garden I felt on my back
Stares of praise and bewildered applause


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I fell in love and kept on falling

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 10-15-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-08-1999 11:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

BRAVO! And 'Hands of time crept on their toes'...fabulous!

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2 posted 10-08-1999 11:31 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

And stares and applause are quite due...well written Master. Kind of a mate between reality and a dream world on this one. I like!!

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
Master
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3 posted 10-09-1999 12:46 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Denise and HOot! I'm glad you liked it.
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You're welcome, Master, 'twas absolutely splendiferous!! (is that a word? If not it should be!)

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Denise
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5 posted 10-15-1999 07:53 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Ahhhh, Master....I liked this a lot !
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6 posted 10-15-1999 07:56 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Excellent! Fabulous read!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Master
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7 posted 10-15-1999 08:14 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I thought this one was buried, but it resurrected. Thanks for bringing me back to life!
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8 posted 10-15-1999 08:28 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Hmmm ... what a captivating image.

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

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Another superb piece, my friend! Deserving of resurrection, I say. Glad I didn't miss it this time around.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Master
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10 posted 10-15-1999 10:13 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Nochtdraco and Caroline! I'm glad you guys liked it!
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yes!
 
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