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the "time" of our lives

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RobertB
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0 posted 10-08-1999 10:56 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Time

As surely as the plow
tears through the soil-
uprooting
disrupting
furrowing...
preparing the field
for cultivation,
time just as surely
plows through our lives-
birth
growth
death...
leaving its mark
on generations.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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Denise
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And we can only hope to leave a 'mark' of worth. Well done, Robert.

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Denise
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Robert...okay, I becoming a fan here...got to write something I don't like

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Robert I enjoyed this one very much....


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Good one Robert! I like your imagery!
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Just as there is erosion to the soil, also can a family erode, if not taken care of. Well done, Sir!
RobertB
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Thank you all...I guess my experiences in life have just left me with this awe of the whole deal....thank you.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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