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RobertB
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0 posted 10-08-1999 10:41 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Hoping

A grounded swan is still guided
by instinctual yearnings
to waters calm and free-
A man confined
will wish liberty
from captors and shackles-
And lovers separated
by the gulf of emotions
will build bridges.


RB

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A beautiful piece of writing.

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Denise, you always make me want to write more and more and more. Thank you so much.

Robert

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You're welcome!

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EXCELLENT!!! Robert, there is not a wasted word amoung the bunch of them here and you speak from your heart in your words. This was wonderful...now off to build a few bridges

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
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You go Ruth!!! You go Girl....you don't have to be an engineer to build a bridge.

RB

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