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RobertB
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0 posted 10-08-1999 10:36 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Listening


Raindrops fall on an emotionally parched earth
yet the suns brilliant rays evaporate their worth
and such is the ending just as it began
when one follows the cycle of the circle of man.
Moonbeams flee from their source soon to be gone
there isn't much time to dance on the lawn
for when night becomes day the waltz isn't remembered
and the fondest of dreams our minds have dismembered.
So questing for substance with permanence not mentioned
we must look deeper than mere consciousness intentioned
this is initiated by defining the start
listening to words spoken from a heart to a heart.

RB

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'listening to words spoken from a heart to a heart'. Very lovely.

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i like the imagery you used......'an emotionally parched earth'.
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Very nice, Robert. Words spoken from a heart to heart is very touching.

Ohme
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thank you very much guys....errr gals....err I mean guys?????



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