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suicidal dreams
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0 posted 10-08-1999 07:15 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suicidal dreams

GLORIFIED LIES OF YESTERYEAR
HORRID LIES THAT SPEAK OF CHEAR
IDEAL LIES THAT MAKE SOME JEER
POLLITICAL LIES WHICH WE FEAR
TEACHERS LIES THAT WE HEAR
SPEAKERS LIES AT WHICH WE LEAR

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The poem's idea was good, I thought. HAs some spelling errors though, and I think the end was too abript....it doesn't have proper closing really.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
 
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