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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Invincible Actions Climbing a ladder to beyond her brain avoiding obstacles without a moments disdain. Reflection in mirror wiggling finger hastily as she escalates her being further past an illusionary galaxy. Invincible actions leave her paralyzed in fright as doctors reveal the loss of sight. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I had trouble grasping the meaning of this poem. I thought that you might be referring to some sort of brain surgery where the patient is still conscious and watching (referral to mirror and wiggling fingers). |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Martie, Sorry you did not understand, it's about someone partying to much, and becoming invincible, and tragedy happens. Thanks for reading, and commenting, hope it's more clear now. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
with a teenage son, this hits hard.....amazing how invincable they think the are ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth, Teenagers become invincible because they think it's fun, they never think something terrible could happen. Problem is at times adults can be just as invincible, and they should know better. Thanks for reading, I pray your son stays safe. |
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